Waveplace St John Pilot
Please change the word "kill" to "hurt" or change the sentence along the lines of "if you're going to be mean". Otherwise, I like the storyline that encourages kids to get along.
I enjoyed your animations and descriptions of the breeze and restaurant smells.
The story has a good plot, but the author needs to check spacing and grammar.
Very cute little story. I like the wagging tail!
I could not get this project on my computer.
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